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2 (or 7) No-Brainer Web and Email Communication Essentials (Did the Internet Suck Our Minds?)

Email and web content have the power to inform and communicate ideas faster and easier than ever before. Why, then, are we forgetting basic rules of communication? Here are some essential tips to remember.
Written Mar 11, 2009, read 1481 times since then.
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2 (or 7) No-Brainer Web and Email Communication Essentials OR:

Did the Internet Suck Away Our Minds?

Maybe this is a rant, not an article on web and email writing and communications. Is it a white paper? You decide. It will be short. Direct. To the point. And answer the question:

What marketing and writing basics did I forget in my email or on my web page today?

The Changing Face of Copywriting

Copywriting is a funny business. I’ve been a writer and editor of print and web content since Al Gore invented the Internet. Web content and emails are getting:

· Shorter

· More punchy

· Focused on SEO (Search Engine Optimization)

· More direct

· Hyper audience-focused

I hope your emails and web copy reflect those communication ideals. It’s a start.

Here’s the problem: forgetting basic communication skills

In our web content and emails, we forget basic communication principles proven during CENTURIES of Direct Mail marketing. There are two key customer-focused communication questions that many websites and emails don’t answer:

  • What are you telling me
  • How do I contact you?

Simple, right? Yet 70% of the websites and emails I read DON'T answer those questions. I think the web is sucking out our minds.

Communication examples and best practice solutions

1) “What are you telling me?” – website. Do you go to a website page and it says “About Jill” or “Being Happy” or “Improve Your Life”? What you’re telling me? Instead, how about “Using [my product or service feature] to [benefit #1], [benefit #2], etc.” (Note: This also has HUGE search engine optimization benefits.)

2) “What are you telling me?” – email. How many times do you get an email that says “No Subject” or “Re:_________”? If I’m expecting that email from RichG, I’ll know what it’s about. But 2 days later, when I want to reference it, how will I find it? Use the subject box. Subject: “Re: White paper workshop + Kuhns’ case study thoughts.”

3) “How Do I Contact You?” - website. I would never give out a business card that just said: “David Kuhns, Web Content Writer” without my email and phone number on it. But our websites do that every day.

Your customer is on your website. They want to contact you. Tell them how on every page. Don’t make them click “Contact us” to get that information there. Top page, bottom page, side bar, wherever: Every page should have your email (with a hot link) and phone information.

4) “How Do I Contact You?” – email. How many times have you received an email that says: “Call me.” and you look at their auto signature and it only says “Dave Kuhns”? So you scroll down through ALL the emails in the chain, until you find the original email with their signature on it. UNLESS the emails are truncated… then you have to go through your contact list, where MAYBE you’ll find them. Don’t make your customer work. Make it easy for them. It’s pretty simple: Name. Phone Number. Email. “Dave Kuhns, 206-605-2022, dgkuhns_writer@msn.com.”

5) “How Do I Contact You?” – white papers, case studies, marketing collateral. Have your contact information – including your name, phone number, and email – on EVERY page of your white paper, research report, case study, marketing collateral. Put it in the footer. Remember: If this is printed out, front and back pages get lost all the time. How do they contact the person (you) who wrote the brilliant paragraph that everyone is copying and quoting on page 3 of your white paper?

6) “How Do I Contact You?” – web video and social media. Web video newsletters, YouTube, Veoh, WordPress blogs, etc. are the rage. The other day I got a video from a friend of a friend of an associate, etc., etc. It was a GREAT business video – and NOWHERE on it was ANY contact information! I have no idea how to contact the person on it. It’s easy to imbed contact information onto your web-based viral video, blog, or other social media. Don’t forget.

7) “What are you telling me?” / How Do I Contact You?” – telephone. While technically NOT web-based, phone messages still drive me crazy. The other day I got a phone from a lady with a very sultry voice. “Dave, I so enjoyed our chat yesterday. Call me!” Chat about what? What about her phone number? Withheld on my cell phone screen. [Note: Call me!]

Simple Solutions, Big Results

Maybe this is simplistic. But look at your emails and web content. Do they answer those questions:

  • What are you telling me?
  • How do I contact you?

If they don’t – fix them. And, while you’re at it, see if you can answer those questions better.

And now I’d like to eat my own dog food. But I can't (Biznik rules). You have to go hunting for my contact information. BUT, before you do that, please not only comment on my article, but rate it (it's a two step process). Now you can go look for my contact information. See how annoying that is? But, trust me, it will be worth it!.

No, really. It will be.

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Comment on this article

  • Permanent Cosmetic Makeup Technician and Makeup Artist 
Seattle, Washington 
Jennifer Alexander
    Posted by Jennifer Alexander, Seattle, Washington | Mar 11, 2009

    That's bringing it back to basics David, chalked full of reminders! I appreciate the subject matter of creating personal responsibility of communicating effectively, whether in a voicemail or web-based, along with presenting the tools to implement this.

    Write on~

    Jen

  • Free-Lance Writer, Poet, Senior Editor of SuperBusyWomen.com 
Portland, Oregon 
Michelle Gurule
    Posted by Michelle Gurule, Portland, Oregon | Mar 11, 2009

    Great article. Your personal anecdotes and humor will help me remember your points -- they seem so obvious, yet too many of us are forgetting these communications essentials.

    Michelle www.superbusywomen.com

  • Writer, trainer in SEO, local search, web content, communications, marketing and adult education. Storyteller, poet, marketing/communications consultant 
Springville, Utah 
David Kuhns
    Posted by David Kuhns, Springville, Utah | Mar 11, 2009

    Thanks for your comments Jennifer and Michelle (and I like how Michelle included at least SOME contact information! She's learning!) Don't forget to rate my article, as well as comment on it.
    Dave Kuhns, web content writer www.cyranowriter.com

  • Marketing & Business Development Consultant 
Bellevue, Washington 
Loma Gregg
    Posted by Loma Gregg, Bellevue, Washington | Mar 12, 2009

    Thanks Dave. Great reminders! These are pet peeves of mine as well! I think we all 'feel' the same, but often forget to 'do' these simple tasks.

    Remember fellow Biznikers, if any message be it web, email or video doesn't get to the point in the first 4 seconds - your potential customers loose interest.

    LomaGregg@gmail.com

  • Internet Sales Consultant 
Seattle, Washington 
Howard Howell
    Posted by Howard Howell, Seattle, Washington | Mar 13, 2009

    Dave...

    Your article was interesting. I learned something new. It was helpful. I like you. Sort of like the "all I ever need to know I learned in kindergarten", book, huh? Keep it up.

    Want more feedback, contact me. Howard 206.909.9994

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