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Sean Earley
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Is your Happy Blog Actually a Dark Cloud of Doom?

Is your happy business blog coming off to customers as a dark cloud of doom? Maybe you owe it to yourself to get a second opinion and maybe even a redesign.
Written Jun 17, 2010, read 1505 times since then.
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So I was asked recently to check out a blog post by someone who is a professional motivational speaker.

Their writing was excellent and the topics of the posts were really good as well.  At least I think they were.  I'm pretty sure it... was... um... sort of... well...

To be honest, unfortunately I didn't stick around long enough to finish reading anything because for some reason the longer I stayed on the website, I started to find myself getting more and more tired, bored, as well as aware of just this general feeling of dread and melancholy.

Their blog was depressing me.


Do you know of any websites like this? You get there with high expectations based on their external articles or social networking presence, only to get to their website and suddenly start to feel like you're losing blood?

Was this person a vampire?? No.

So why was I feeling that way, and more importantly, being a friend and still feeling this way, what do you think the readers and potential customers might feel?

I think I got distracted after leaving the site and didn't return for a couple days.  The only reason I did remember to return was because this person followed up and asked what I though because I hadn't left a comment yet.

Immediately the feeling of dread returned and I almost winced as I clicked back on their link. Oh man... (deep breath...)

An then as the page loaded, it hit me. This was a blog focusing on motivational subject matter and I was physically feeling scared and ill. 

Epic fail right?

Now when you think motivation, what are some visual images that come to your mind?  

For me if I were just to quickly do a stream of consciousness in no particular order, I came up with: action, progress, sunshine, light, rays of light, light breaking though clouds, something new, fresh, clean, excitement, angels singing, trumpets, lalalaaaah!!! happiness, blue sky, progress, joy, green grass, buddha glowing head floating, smiling faces, hands raised to the sky, enlightenment, clean, white, blue, green, yellow....

Wait a minute... did I just say, clean? light? white, blue, green...?

Then like a light going off in a dark tunnel, it occurred to me just what was so freaking scary about this website.

The topic of the website was "motivation" and their design was almost completely grey. 

All grey with a grey header, blurry dark navy blue logo, and some funky 80's nail salon fashion color scheme (not in a cool retro way) with a dark grey background and dark text over that dark background.

To top it all off, their blurry bio photo looked like it was taken with a cheap cell phone camera, in front of a dark navy blue Sears portrait studio style background, cropped at a funky shape and obviously too large to fit in the slim sidebar.

No wonder their motivational blog was so un motivating! 

They were literally setting themselves up to look like a creepy vampire in a design that was literally swimming in a muddy grey, blurry, cloudy day!

An inspiration maybe for the Schleprocks on the Flinstones, but not me...

Do you know someone with a blog like this?  Maybe even, dare I say, your own blog?

Here are a few suggestions to consider if you suspect you might be suffering from Blog of Doom-itis

  • What is the overall visual impression you are trying to express with your business and does your blog represent it?
  • What are the basic color associations with the topic of your business and does your blog color scheme match up?
  • Try getting an informal opinion from someone you feel will give you an honest, unbiased answer.
  • (Tip: I always grab a teenager because they are always so pop culture style focussed, not to mention brutally honest, so they will more likely be able to give you an honest answer.)
  • Try adding a polling widget on your site and ask people what they think and ask for feedback.
  • Try posting on your favorite social network of choice and ask for opinions.
  • Try picking up a couple magazines based on your business niche and take note of the general styling and colors. Does it clash? Magazines usually spend lots of money on design and market research, so they usually are a good benchmark for what the visual pulse is for that particular industry.
  • Try going to sites like http://www.templatemonster.com and searching for designs that match your business theme.  
  • You can also go to http://cssline.com/ and enter in a color scheme and find great design ideas based around those colors you feel fit your business theme.


So, does your theme match up? If not maybe you need to change some things.

Sometimes, its really nothing major, just a tweak and spit shine in the right place and your gloomy website is suddenly modern and snappy.

If your blog theme allows it, a couple quick stylesheet color tweaks and sometimes thats all you need.

If that's beyond your skill level, you can either purchase any number of very solid blog templates for under $100 or even hire a very decent designer for a basic redesign for under $500

So to summarize, the general visual impression of your business website is just as important as having a clean designer suit and a slick haircut.  It says a LOT about you, so if you really want to come off to your readers as a professional, your website should visually reflect that as well.

If your blog is your business, you owe it to yourself to insure that it makes the right impression and doesn't scare people off, like a dark cloud of doom.

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  • Commercial Photographer 
Olympia, Washington 
Gary Silverstein
    Posted by Gary Silverstein, Olympia, Washington | Jun 17, 2010

    Hi Sean -

    I agree.

    I am always amazed at the websites people come up with. Not realizing that everyone's monitor coloring and brightness is different is a huge mistake. I wonder if these people had turned the brightness down on their monitors, that they would have used a grey background with black lettering, or a black background with hazy gray text? Maybe they don't feel anybody would really read it, anyway. That makes their prophecy self-fulfilling. I like my websites like I like my books - white or very light background and very dark or black text.

  • Professional Training & Coaching 
Seattle, Washington 
Michael Hartzell
    Posted by Michael Hartzell, Seattle, Washington | Jun 18, 2010

    Coincidentally, I have a dark cloud of gloom at the top of my website. I also have lightning....

    It is a photo I took here two years and 10 days ago.

    It was no less than amazing.

    Fortunately, I have a reason for sharing the storm. Capturing the moment by taking action vs. sitting still might prove to bear fruit.

    I am not a fan of templatemonster but cssline.com does look interesting.

    Too bad your blog review did not reveal the url name. We would love to look over the shoulder of while you did a before and after!

    Since I am NOT a graphics person (though I see it in my head, my fingers don't cooperate), I especially appreciated the reminder.

    Art is a funny thing though is it not?

    Good stuff... off to click that rate button now. Wonder why it isn't down here close? :)

    P.S. It would be great to have an A/B test with a before / after for conversions would it not? How cool would that be?

  • Information Architect, Designer, Marketing Consultant, Writer  
Wiesbaden, Hessen Germany 
Sean Earley
    Posted by Sean Earley, Wiesbaden, Hessen Germany | Jun 18, 2010

    I agree Gary and I am also a big fan of dark text on white. I actually had a discussion with a friend who is a designer for a major mobile company and we both seemed to feel that in many ways, visual design is becoming much less relevant and in many ways can actually be an obstacle in regards to communication, networking and sharing content and ideas.

    Being a designer I guess I could be shooting myself in the foot, but it seems that the older I get and the more I use blogs and social networks, I find that the less I need to worry about look and feel, the more productive I am, and the more it levels the field by helping to focus on the message.

    Michael, your "doom cloud" header makes a statement and your blog is totally easy to read, so I think you have nothing to worry about. I like your big social networking icons too. Speaking of, yes a rate button at the bottom of a post would be a great idea.

    Yes a URL would be nice for reference, but that would be mean and my intention was to get people to think about their own design and not point fingers.

    If I do some before and afters I will certainly consider documenting it and doing an article about it though. Good idea.

  • Entrepreneur,mentor,blogger,musician,graphic artist 
New York, New York 
Theresa Bradley-Banta
    Posted by Theresa Bradley-Banta, New York, New York | Jun 21, 2010

    Good read Sean, thanks!

    I'm compelled to add, especially after blogging on the very topic last week, that changing your environment (this would include your electronic 'environment') can have an amazing impact on your own personal inspiration and motivation. It's also a great way to get unstuck.

    What I didn't talk about is the impact your design will have on others.

    I love your take on this. Thanks for sharing your post -- and thanks for delivering the message with a sense of humor. Creepy vampires and all.

    Theresa

  • Writing & Publishing Coach, Business & Marketing Consultant 
Bellevue, Washington 
Deborah Drake
    Posted by Deborah Drake, Bellevue, Washington | Jun 24, 2010

    Sean,

    In addition to your subject matter, I want you to know I really appreciate your writing voice. It shines through. Your enthusiasm as well as the truth of your emotional experience.

    Makes me wonder what you think of my chosen template...especially since you read and commented on my latest post (thank you very much!)

    I get that you know your stuff...and honesty upfront works wonders for a receptive client.

    This in particular struck me:

    If your blog is your business, you owe it to yourself to insure that it makes the right impression and doesn't scare people off, like a dark cloud of doom.

    That applies to both content and design, indeed.

    You are a welcome addition to the Biznik community, as you write us from Germany...

    Thanks for the post and keep them coming!

    Deborah

    Authentic Writing Provokes

  • Information Architect, Designer, Marketing Consultant, Writer  
Wiesbaden, Hessen Germany 
Sean Earley
    Posted by Sean Earley, Wiesbaden, Hessen Germany | Jun 24, 2010

    Why shucks ma'am. Thanks. I admire and am humbled by your eloquent command of the written word, so I appreciate the compliment.

    Of course your blog was NOT the dark cloud of Doom I was referring to. Actually it's not anyone on Biznik, at least that I am aware of, so no need to worry.

    Your blog is very readable and effective. I do have some thoughts on improvement though now that I think about it, so if you ever want to have that chat we can talk about it if you want. It's nothing doomy though of course.

  • Writing & Publishing Coach, Business & Marketing Consultant 
Bellevue, Washington 
Deborah Drake
    Posted by Deborah Drake, Bellevue, Washington | Jun 24, 2010

    I accept.

    Who doesn't want a blog that is both readable and easy on the eye!

    Glad that who I am in business and what I write about are experienced as being in sync and easy to digest. As for blogging being a tool I use for business, but also a forum for self-expression, I enjoy writing for writing sake and really appreciate the freedom that Wordpress and Blogger and Typepad give a writer--who is not a graphic designer.

    What freedom you ask? I can feel that curiosity...(smile). The freedom to help themselves to a good design template, and customize if they can manage alone. Or they can seek out help for a reasonable fee.

    And then they can focus on content and pour their heart into their posts. Those are the blogs that capture my readership and loyalty. Part technical skill and part storytelling. Works everytime.

    I am big on teaching people how to help themselves and overcome the obstacles that cause procrastination and pause. Being thoughtful and on purpose about that first impression we make is a big part of it.

    I welcome any and all feedback you have to enhance my "labor of love and livelihood."

    Deborah

    Authentic Writing Provokes

  • Writing & Publishing Coach, Business & Marketing Consultant 
Bellevue, Washington 
Deborah Drake
    Posted by Deborah Drake, Bellevue, Washington | Jun 24, 2010

    P.S. As you agreed, I "reprinted" with comments that fine post of yours on how to avoid social media overwhelm with my commentary on why I like it, and have no desire to reinvent the wheel.

    Thanks for your comment on my post written on a not so stormy but dark night...(smile).

    Deborah

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