I would also add that that your elevator speech should point out how you are a problem solver. We all have problems and we usually want to solve them.
Top 10 Reasons You Need A Killer Elevator Speech
How do you answer the "what do you do?" question? If you haven't got an elevator speech, you're probably not getting the right message out there. Read the nine other good reasons for creating your own elevator speech here.
It is my firm belief that virtually every person in business for her- or himself needs a killer elevator speech. Yes, that means you, too. Wondering why a killer elevator speech is so important? See if you recognize yourself in any of these scenarios:
1. You want a great response to the question "what do you do?" because you've noticed when you reply your job title, the conversation stops right there, the other person's eyes start to glaze over, and you start to panic because you don't know how to revive this conversation without saying something that you know is guaranteed to put your listener to sleep, and in your heart you know that very few people really want to be "educated" about insurance, investment opportunities, or anything else you might be selling.
2. You want a clear, concise and wildly attractive (as in magnetic) value message that you can use in your sales presentations, on your web site, in the voice mail messages you leave, in your own voice mail greeting, on your business cards, and when you introduce yourself so that you stand out from your competitors.
3. You want to attract prospects to you rather than chase them down. OK, maybe I'm just plain lazy, but I find it much easier and quicker to get clients using the principle of attraction rather than going on endless (and often fruitless) client scavenger hunts.
4. You want to prospects to self-qualify by indicating interest in your deliverable(s). You never know who is going to respond to your offer, or who will want your product or service (it's not like people wear signs). Having a killer elevator speech that attracts your ideal clients helps you identify your prospects immediately (especially when you can't recognize them just by sight).
5. You want to convert prospects into clients quickly and easily. I don't know about you, but I prefer to close sales as soon as possible with as little effort as I can get away with. I've found the best way to do that is to attract the people who really want and need my services, so that the sales process is relatively short and painless for both of us.
6. You want to be perceived as credible, competent, and professional. If you're tap dancing around what you do, and refuse to (or can't) be specific about your value to your clients, you're not going to be viewed as a top resource. People respect the professional who knows what she does for her clients, and can articulate it in a few well-chosen words. By the way, your prospects can also tell when you're so desperate for clients that you're willing to say anything to get the sale, whether or not you're a good fit for the client's needs.
7. You want everyone you meet to remember you, what you do, and who would be an ideal referral for you. People can't refer to you if they don't have a clear idea of what you do, and they won't remember more than 10 words about you, guaranteed. That's why your elevator speech needs to specify both your ideal client as well as your deliverables or client outcomes, and be memorable.
8. You don't want to fumble for words or say the wrong thing to a prospect or potential referral partner. After all, the first time you're speaking to your prospects is very much like an audition or a job interview. Your prospects are drawing conclusions (or making judgments, however you like to frame it) about you, your capabilities, and your potential value to them, all within the first 3.5 seconds of meeting you. Does it come as a surprise that you make a far better impression when you're prepared?
9. You want permission to explain in more detail what you do for your clients, so you need a compelling, concise and attractive elevator speech that prompts people to ask for more information. Remember, the two questions that people ask themselves when you're talking about your business are: Is he talking about me? Do I want what she's talking about? If the answer to either of these questions is yes, then you will be granted about 30 seconds to make your case. If the answer to both questions is no, then it's time to move on. And frankly, isn't it better to know that sooner, rather than later?
10. You don't want to bore people to tears within 30 seconds of meeting them. The sad truth is that most people have the attention spans of gnats, thanks to our culture of instant gratification, but you can use that to your advantage by crafting an attention-getting elevator speech that speaks directly to the deepest desires of your ideal clients. Unless, of course, you enjoy being known as a bore.
There may be a few reasons you need a killer elevator speech that I haven't listed here, but these should be enough for you to at least consider developing your own killer elevator speech.
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Comment on this article
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Posted by Keith Gormezano, Seattle, Washington | Mar 25, 2008
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Posted by Chris Haddad, Seattle, Washington | Mar 25, 2008
A great elevator speech should actually awaken curiosity in the person that reads it.
For instance, when someone asks me what I do, I'll often say "I use 5 simple techniques to radically increase your sales. In fact, one of my clients used these techniques to make over $300,000.00 in less than 60 minutes."
Which works a heck of a lot better than "I write copy."
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Posted by Nina Durfee, Sammamish, Washington | Mar 25, 2008
Great article, Ronnie. I would add that an elevator pitch is not only about what you do, but about who you are. A sentence beginning, "I am someone who. . ." opens the door to explain not only what service you provide, but why you are the best person to offer it. For instance, I coach entrepreneurial women to live and work not by default, but by design. I am someone who uses structure to support change. I help you dance easily within your existing structure or help you co-create the structure that best supports your business and personal intentions.
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Posted by David Billings, Portland, Oregon | Mar 26, 2008
I had an elevator speech once. It went something like this: "I create fun images for people to support their articles, sell their books, and market their products. I love making people look good!"
Most of the time I got, "So... you're a graphic designer, an illustrator...wha?"
When I say I'm an illustrator and animator, people seem to want to know more, even if they don't instantly make a connection with my service as something they need.
Is it crazy to not have a pre-prepared speech? I feel like I sound like I just showed up at the door to take a poll.
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Posted by Cathy Goodwin, Seattle, Washington | Mar 26, 2008
David, In some ways I agree with you. It can get ridiculous: If I need a carpet cleaner, I don't want someone who creates a pure environment in my home.
Sometimes people get so convoluted in their explanations, it's worse than just saying, "I am an illustrator."
You could eperiment with a variation: "Writers call me when they..."
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