Hi Hilary,
I'm impressed by how quickly you've jumped into it. I actually have a different view- I'm not so focused on SEO- although it's worth paying attention to, the biggest thing to watch in my mind: is your site making a connection to potential clients, or not?
I wrote an article What the heck really does belong on your home page? I'll load it into Biznik articles, but for right now, here it is: (http://heartofbusiness.com/articles/2006/Sep6.htm)
the biggest thing I notice about your home page is that the very first thing you ask me to do is "learn more" about why I should outsource to you. But, you haven't made any connection to me. I don't know who you are. I don't know who you serve, or what you do. I don't even know if you really get who I am and what my problems are.
Not to be too blunt, but that kind of a call to action is a classic "me" centered request.
Read the article above, and it will explain how to begin to connect to a new visitor, and help them feel safe enough to take the next step with you.
The biggest thing people underestimate is how much safety it takes for someone to purchase. Marketing is not about attraction- it's about creating safety- and safety is created through people feeling understood, seen, witnessed.
Make sense? Let me know if the article is helpful.


