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A C  Sherpa
Posted by A C Sherpa, Seattle, Washington | Apr 10, 2008

Subscribe to Biznik community-builders forum I need your opinion to help me choose slogan for my business

Hello everyone,

I am new members with biznik.com and I like to ask your opinion to slogan for my website. Let me tell you what I do! I lead Trek & Expedition to Nepal, Tibet, Bhutan and India. I am a professional guide to Himalayas. These three slogans out of one, I and my web designer choose. My website is www.himalayansherpa.com Please see bellow…… "Creating memories of a lifetime..."

"Journeys of Exploration and Discoveries...."

"UNLEASH YOURSELF"

Thank you very much for your help!

A C Sherpa

16 Bizniks have posted replies

  • Andrey Rozmaity
    Posted by Andrey Rozmaity, Renton, Washington | Apr 11, 2008

    I like the "creating memories of a lifetime" but I would add something before memories which would tell of what kind of memories one would have.

    How about: "Creating unforgettable memories of a lifetime."


    Good luck,

    -Andrey

  • A C  Sherpa
    Posted by A C Sherpa, Seattle, Washington | Apr 11, 2008

    Hello Andrey,

    Hi, there How are you? talk to more later in future! Thank you for your suggestion.

    A.C Sherpa

  • Karen Pierce Gonzalez
    Posted by Karen Pierce Gonzalez, Rohnert Park, California | Apr 11, 2008

    Could you create a slogan (tagline) that reflects what's geographically specific to your services or what's unique about what you provide? For example: Trekking the Himalayas like a Native or Visit the real Nepal, Tibet, Bhutan and India

    Get the idea? Hope this helps, Karen

  • Norbert Mayer-Wittmann
    Posted by Norbert Mayer-Wittmann, Old Greenwich, Connecticut | Apr 13, 2008

    I guess one CRITICAL element in deciding on slogans is the CONTEXT that you expect your audience to hear/see the slogan. Another critical element is what hearing / seeing the slogan is supposed to motivate them to DO.

    Before making a MEANINGFUL decision on which slogan is best, I think these questions have to be answered first. Maybe other questions too, but these 2 popped into my head.

    Hope this helps.

    :) nmw

  • Anita CM
    Posted by Anita CM, Hyderabad, Andhra Pradesh India | Apr 13, 2008

    Unforgettable Himalayan trekking experience guaranteed...

    Though a bit long but i guess it captures the essence of your buisness.

  • Alana Jelinek
    Posted by Alana Jelinek, Santa Rosa, CA, California | Apr 24, 2008

    Hi AC,

    I think that your current tagline could be applied to any travel experience. What is unique about your travel adventure is probably altitude and the unique beauty of the area.

    What is something about this trip that exists no where else, can't be duplicated?

    I'm thinking things like....

    Discover the top of the world.....

    Sitting on top of the world

    Reach the heights of experience

    something along those lines

    happy to brainstorm further with you if anything strikes a gong.

    Alana

  • Nikhil Wad
    Posted by Nikhil Wad, Mumbai, Maharashtra India | Apr 25, 2008

    Unleash yourself with Himalayan trekking!

  • Kelly Blanscet
    Posted by Kelly Blanscet, Austin, Texas | May 12, 2008

    Creating memories of a lifetime..." and "Journeys of Exploration and Discoveries...." sound all very trite and expected. Like I've heard it over and over again in other ad speak (and I know of which I speak since I do work in the advertising industry).

    "UNLEASH YOURSELF" opens a whole world of possibilities. Let yourself loose on the world. I LOVE IT!

    graphicgranola

  • Cathy Goodwin
    Posted by Cathy Goodwin, Seattle, Washington | May 18, 2008

    I'd say hold off on the slogan till you get further along. It's too easy to get stuck with a slogan that isn't really "you" and may actually turn off some potential clients.

    Your best slogan will come to you when a client says something that feels just right.

  • Neil Rondeau
    Posted by Neil Rondeau, Bellevue, Washington | May 24, 2008

    himalayansherpa.com

    -What would you do at 29 thousand feet?

    *when spoken, emphasis on the "You"

  • Neil Rondeau
    Posted by Neil Rondeau, Bellevue, Washington | May 24, 2008

    In an unofficial poll, it tested better than:

        Pulmonary edema, it's a b|#<h
    

    tee hee hee -ahem. sorry.

  • A C  Sherpa
    Posted by A C Sherpa, Seattle, Washington | May 24, 2008

    29, 035 what you do! Well, some people have goal or, dream to achieve. Do what you love the most. Why do you go to school? To make money or, to major the subject and what you want to be? Same climbing Mountain is love and passion, what makes you happiness in your life. Some people like to hike, some like bike, some people like walk and some people like to seat home and be couch potato. But, once who like to be in 29, 035ft may be like climbing. Ha ha ha ha

    He he he he

  • A C  Sherpa
    Posted by A C Sherpa, Seattle, Washington | May 24, 2008

    Why do you like be real estate agent? it's because of Money?

  • Neil Rondeau
    Posted by Neil Rondeau, Bellevue, Washington | May 24, 2008

    Nope, it's not the money. I like the people I meet, the stories I hear, and the families I help. The investment choices I facilitate. The long time friendships that develop. It all leads to a great sense of satisfaction and accomplishment in the end.

    It's not bad being rewarded for my efforts but as detailed in the article on my home page, you (a fellow realtor) know we work more for our commission than people are aware of. So the income ends up being commensurate with the output of effort and service we provide. Not to mention our investment in marketing --and these days, just paying for the gas to drive around. :(

    The broker's open gala events are a lot of though. :D

  • Julian Michael
    Posted by Julian Michael, Bellevue, Washington | May 30, 2008

    Great comments by Neil - the latter slogan had me laughing a bit!

    Allow me to summarize

    Business Focus: Leading rigorous treks and expeditions through Himalayan regions such as India, Nepal, Tibet, and Bhutan regions.

    Position: Expert-level Himalayan Guide

    Website: www.himalayansherpa.com

    General Slogan: "Bring your backpack...and maybe a small lunch!" (comedic) or "Learn what 'The Sky's the Limit' really means!" (inspirational) or "Let's go for a walk in the clouds!" (simple)

    Mission Statement: Consider this in 2-3 sentences max.

    Target Market: Who are you looking to focus on attracting? Different demographics are inspired differently, especially through words and images.

    I used to sit around with some creative types at Nike, Brooks and several event marketing companies. Saw your posting and thought I'd offer my two cents!

    -Julian

  • Stephen Baker
    Posted by Stephen Baker, Liverpool United Kingdom | Jun 03, 2008

    "Himalayas. Rarely achieved and never bettered".

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Members posting in this topic

  • Andrey Rozmaity
    New & Used Car Sales
    Renton, Washington
  • A C  Sherpa
    Real Estate/ mountain guide
    Seattle, Washington
  • Karen Pierce Gonzalez
    Public Relations
    Rohnert Park, California
  • Norbert Mayer-Wittmann
    search marketing online advertising business...
    Old Greenwich, Connecticut
  • Anita CM
    PHP/AJAX Freelance Programmer
    Hyderabad, Andhra Pradesh India
  • Alana Jelinek
    Graphic Design
    Santa Rosa, CA, California
  • Nikhil Wad
    Nikhil Wad
    Director
    Mumbai, Maharashtra India
  • Kelly Blanscet
    creative director, graphic granola
    Austin, Texas
  • Cathy Goodwin
    Web Site Marketing Coach
    Seattle, Washington
  • Neil Rondeau
    Neil Rondeau
    Real Estate Agent (REALTOR)
    Bellevue, Washington
  • Julian Michael
    Photographer + Portrait Artist
    Bellevue, Washington
  • Stephen Baker
    Starting again from nothing
    Liverpool United Kingdom

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