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<span class="provip_member_name">Joe Shirley</span>
Joe Shirley
Pioneer, Writer, Teacher, Speaker, Coach
Seattle, Washington
Posted by Joe Shirley, Seattle, Washington | Mar 12, 2009

Subscribe to Groups Group - Discussion How might we use Groups in creative, non-obvious ways?

I have an idea for a group, and wanted to float it out there.

Rough Drafts: Feedback for articles in progress
For writers to submit article drafts and get/give feedback. Let's talk about what makes a great article and coach one another toward quality writing for the web.

My vision for this group is that people who aren't so confident in their writing could submit a draft, get feedback, make revisions, and submit their final draft where appropriate: perhaps to another group or to the main article page.

Is this practical? Will it work? Will it be useful?

Another question: Can business names/brands be used in a group name? For example, could I create a Mondo Charisma™ group?

What other ideas do people have for possible non-obvious ways to use this new functionality?

11 Bizniks have posted replies

  • Joe Shirley
    Posted by Joe Shirley, Seattle, Washington | Mar 13, 2009

    Another idea: A Teleclass Group.

    This would give Biznik a place where people who are interested in participating in or hosting teleclasses could gather. People could see the events no matter where they are located because of their inclusion in the group. The locale limitation is gone!

  • Dan McComb
    Posted by Dan McComb, Seattle, Washington | Mar 13, 2009

    Yes, you can certainly use your own business name in the title of your group. I'm not sure about the legality of using other business names, though. One thing I do ask: Don't use "biznik" in the name, because we reserve that for "official" biznik stuff.

  • Biznik Community Tech Support
    Posted by Biznik Community Tech Support, Seattle, Washington | Mar 13, 2009

    Teleclasses are a perfect example of a good Biznik Group. People can sign up for the group if they are open to the idea of teleclasses (webinars, etc), so hosts have a self-selected audience, waiting for their content.

    I would also like to see a "Fledgling Communities" Group. This is a place where the leaders from different communities could work together on best practices, etc, for building a Biznik community in their area.

  • PJ Harris
    Posted by PJ Harris, Seattle, Washington | Mar 14, 2009

    Mr. Joe (Ideas) Shirley, I love the Rough Drafts group idea. Please start it. Thanks. PJ

  • Maura Desimone
    Posted by Maura Desimone, Gig Harbor, Tacoma, Seattle, Washington | Mar 14, 2009

    I love the "Rough Draft" group idea. That's a consistent issue I find in discussions with people. So many have no confidence in their own writing skills, and feel very intimidated by writing for their blogs or posting articles. I think it would be very useful.

  • Richard Baum
    Posted by Richard Baum, Seattle, Washington | Mar 14, 2009

    Joe,

    As a devotee of digital dissemination of data to a diverse dichotomy (i.e. here and there) I am down with this departure from current policy (ran out of "D" words). In fact the eBiz Junkies group is founded on the principle that "one-to-many" is a good thing and leverages our ability to share ideas and information.

    I also like the concept of sharing drafts to get feedback.

  • Kate Phillips
    Posted by Kate Phillips, Carnation, Seattle, Washington | Mar 14, 2009

    the rough draft idea is a great one.

  • Leila Anasazi
    Posted by Leila Anasazi, St. Louis & Seattle, Washington | Mar 24, 2009

    Thumbs-up on rough draft group. Please send me an invite when you launch.

  • Biznik Community Tech Support
    Posted by Biznik Community Tech Support, Seattle, Washington | Mar 24, 2009

    My only question about the Rough Drafts group is about data persistence...

    Google watches us constantly, and changes to Biznik are quickly found in Google.

    That means imperfect, incomplete versions of your writing will appear in Google, alongside the finished versions of the same work.

    In fact, if you get a lot of feedback on a work in progress, I could see the unfinished work ranking higher in the Google results than the finished piece!

    So the knee-jerk reaction is to NOT post unfinished work to Biznik.

    However, the conversation around improving an article is of value to the larger Biznik community, not just to the author. One can learn valuable lessons by reading the critiques of other peoples' work.

    So the critiques themselves have a value, too.

    Where does that leave us?

    Does having in-progress versions of your work visible to the world scare you?

    Or do you feel your learning experience can help others to learn as well, so you are comfortable leaving that work in the open?

    It is an interesting thing to think about.

    And one final note: Why don't the existing writing-focused Groups fill the perceived need already?

  • Joe Shirley
    Posted by Joe Shirley, Seattle, Washington | Mar 25, 2009

    Christian,

    You bring up some very good points. I'm not sure where that leaves it. I think most people wouldn't care so much, but I'm not sure. Anybody have any ideas / solutions?

    Also, I'm pretty sure I'm not the one to initiate the Rough Drafts group. I'm honestly not so interested in either getting early feedback on articles or giving it. My time is too occupied writing my own stuff at the moment, pages and pages.

    I only saw a creative writing group in the list. Are there others I missed focused on writing stuff like Biznik articles?

  • Karrie Kohlhaas
    Posted by Karrie Kohlhaas, Seattle, Washington | Mar 27, 2009

    I agree that the rough draft idea could be covered in the existing writing groups.

    I also think that rough drafts posted to the site is not a good idea for authors. It would also get really bulky. And to tell you the truth, I think this would be a much cooler event series to host, Joe. You could start another kind of writing group or join an existing one...either way, I could see you hosting events at which people exchange their drafts and give each other feedback or you could project a draft on the wall and get feedback from the room.

    I have done a lot of group writing professionally and I'll tell you what, as an author, you don't want 35 people emailing you with edits. I think getting the input verbally and being able to discuss the draft live is much more powerful and helpful to the authors. I could see you leading that!

Members posting in this topic

  • Joe Shirley
    Pioneer, Writer, Teacher, Speaker, Coach
    Seattle, Washington
  • Dan McComb
    Filmmaker (Biznik Cofounder)
    Seattle, Washington
  • Biznik Community Tech Support
    Customer & Technical Support
    Seattle, Washington
  • PJ Harris
    Treatment Massage Practitioner
    Seattle, Washington
  • Maura Desimone
    Graphic Designer & Illustrator
    Gig Harbor, Tacoma, Seattle, Washington
  • Richard Baum
    Career Catalyst & Business Coach
    Seattle, Washington
  • Kate Phillips
    Practical Prosperity Coach, Speaker, Trainer...
    Carnation, Seattle, Washington
  • Leila Anasazi
    ghost blogger, author, book artist
    St. Louis & Seattle, Washington
  • Karrie Kohlhaas
    The Business Cultivator
    Seattle, Washington

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