I'm throwing in my 2 cents too.
I work in a real estate corporation with a number of RE professionals. It never ceases to amaze me how intoxicated they are with their own verbosity when putting together marketing materials, say, a postcard. I say "Less is more" and let the headline do most of the selling. Nooooo. Instead I will be handed paragraphs of text to include!
Personally, in a world of info overload, I want photos and headlines to do the attention-getting and then give me juuuust enough info so I might call you. Otherwise, you've given me enough reason not to call or hop out to your website.
I'd love to attend an evening workshop on how to think up killer headlines and the process that professional writers go thru to dream up this sort of thing. Maybe you could do one just for all the real estate agents of biz nik so it could be industry specific and everyone would be on the same page. Just an idea... Thanks again for the good article!!! Rita
